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Thundercloud REBORN!

Plasma Bomber added 2 months ago
by SecondBlackjack
Brown Apprentice

Thanks to the return of TX-Cubes, or the equivalent;
Here it is!
The Thundercloud, with minor modifications!
I tried to aim for a recognizable, yet "Thundercloud"-themed design of the bot.

It was never meant to be Battle-Oriented, but it turns out even a bot whipped up in about 20 minutes does surprisingly well!

Anyways, it's still a 20 minute project, and I'd appreciate some feedback about the bot. It's on the CRF for a limited time, [LIGHT] Thundercloud.

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Practical Rating
6.0
Creative Rating
6.3
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Function rating by bobeksmrodek7.5
Creative rating by bobeksmrodek3.5
Function rating by andrefrcaetano8.5
Creative rating by andrefrcaetano9.0
Function rating by Shafty4202.0
Creative rating by Shafty4203.0
Function rating by Silhohen6.0
Creative rating by Silhohen9.5
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Silhohen
2 months ago
Rail on the top is stupid :v
Just name it something else, people have an attachment to Juvar's Thundercloud :P
I dont think its all that bad. Wings arent great (Exposed)
It looks damn good.
The power module is cute but too open :3

Ratings 6.0 practical and 9.5 creative0
Shafty420
2 months ago
Looks nothing like a thundercloud and wing placement is subpar at best

Ratings 2.0 practical and 3.0 creative0
bobeksmrodek
2 months ago
You just made plane and named it thundercloud, and it doesnt even resemble it.... With one rail you wont do much, especially in air.

Ratings 7.5 practical and 3.5 creative0
andrefrcaetano
2 months ago
Rails are more accurate in the air than u think, believe me and it also has a...MASSIVE BIG PLASMA underneath =3

Ratings 8.5 practical and 9.0 creative0
bobeksmrodek
2 months ago
Learn to read my friend, i said ONE rail is useless. Also, i only see 4 plasmas and its not even close to resemble thundercloud... That plane is just a pile of crap, thats all i can say about it.

Ratings 7.5 practical and 3.5 creative0
andrefrcaetano
2 months ago
The rail can be used to counter fliers, and it has a Mega Plasma (i think) so its well armed against ground units, and i think the Thundercloud hes talking about isnt the one made by Juvar, maybe is an older bot made by himself.
Also it looks pretty cool =)

Ratings 8.5 practical and 9.0 creative0
bobeksmrodek
2 months ago
No, its just a plane, thundercloud is a T-Stick. With one rail you wont counter anything, and youre not using mega plasmas, those are epics... Im starting to think youre abnormally retarded or just trolling me....

Ratings 7.5 practical and 3.5 creative0
andrefrcaetano
2 months ago
Why are you being so harsh?
In the picture it looked like a Mega Plasma yes, but it isnt (still, 4 Epic Plasmas are perfectly enough to make some damage).
The rail can be used to shoot fliers or to stop ppl from healing (idk why but it looks like u assumed that the rail was the primary weapon)
And i was saying that this bot could be a better version of another bot made by this user (also called Thundercloud), and i am the one that needs to learn how to read...

Ratings 8.5 practical and 9.0 creative0
bobeksmrodek
2 months ago
I didnt say anything about 4 plasmas being wrong, didnt say rail is primary weapon, its waste of cpu and you wont be able to shoot down anyone with it, his bot was T-stick not plane, so its completly different bot.... doesnt seem like im the one with reading problem.

Ratings 7.5 practical and 3.5 creative0
andrefrcaetano
2 months ago
But you focused on the rail, and Thundercloud is not a thruster stick, it has 4 horizontal rudders, they are just inside of a shell.

Ratings 8.5 practical and 9.0 creative0
bobeksmrodek
2 months ago
Yeah, i was focused on rail. Because you mentioned it in each every one of your comments. In original thundercloud wings were secure, he has explosed and has just 3 on each side. Eh, that wall of text wouldnt happen if he didnt name it thundercloud xD

Ratings 7.5 practical and 3.5 creative0
andrefrcaetano
2 months ago
In my opinion this plane looks cool, but if its meant to be a "version" of Juvar23's Thundercloud, its a bit far from it.

Ratings 8.5 practical and 9.0 creative0

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